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Subject lines and preview text, done right
Length, structure, and the mistake most teams repeat.
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Today's Email: Subject lines and preview text, done right
The inbox is only getting more crowded. AI summaries, priority tabs, smart filters — more signals, more competition, less room for the average email to break through.
Which means the subject line matters more than ever. So does the preview text.
There's no secret formula for writing these. No word that guarantees opens. No length that always wins. But there are good practices, and most teams ignore half of them.
Here's what actually works:
Subject and preview are one unit
Most people write them as two separate tasks. They're not.
The subject line gets the open. The preview text closes it. Together they're the headline and deck of your email.
Which brings us to the most common mistake of repetitive preview text.
For example,
Subject: New arrivals just dropped
Preview: New arrivals just dropped, shop now
You just used 100+ characters to say the same thing twice.
Preview text should extend, not echo.
Subject: New arrivals just dropped
Preview: Three pieces we think will sell out first.
Now the preview adds information. It gives someone a reason to open.
Length
Subject line: 30-50 characters. On iPhone Mail, anything past 41 characters gets cut off. Android and Gmail are slightly more generous. Write for the shortest window and you'll be fine everywhere.
Preview text: 40-90 characters. Apple Mail shows up to 90 on iPhone, Gmail shows about 110 on desktop and 40 on mobile. The first 40 characters do the work.
If your subject line is long, shorten it. If your preview text runs past 90, you're writing for nobody.
Front-load the specific
First two words do the heavy lifting. Put the most concrete, specific thing there.
Weak: Don't miss our summer sale
Strong: 40% off ends tonight
Weak: A quick update on your account
Strong: Your renewal posts Friday
Specificity earns the open. Vagueness gets archived.
What to cut
Emojis in subject lines rarely help and often hurt deliverability at Gmail.
"Re:" and "Fwd:" fakeouts work once. Then people feel tricked and mark you as spam.
ALL CAPS and multiple exclamation points read as promotions at best, spam at worst.
Write three, pick one
Write a subject line. Then write two more.
If you can't tell the difference between the three, you haven't written three. You've written one three times.
Write again. Pick the one that's most specific.
Best,
Alec
P.S. Have a topic you’d like us to cover in the next edition? Reply to this email and let us know! We're always eager to address.

